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Tuesday, 26 April 2016

The Reverse-Spell Stick - Chapter 1


A long time ago, there lived a beautiful  royal couple named King Heneli and Queen Bev. They were very wealthy and lived in one of the most luxury castles called Zeeta Castle. They were very admired and honoured by the people. Unfortunately, King Heneli was a bit arrogant and grumpy. However, he would still help people, yet he would show off that he could help them. On the other hand, Queen Bev was a very loving and calm person.  She was loved by the women and children. She was so modest that she visited few houses every week to give the people some food and even just for a visit.

 There came the day when Queen Bev finally found out that she was pregnant. She rushed to King Heneli while he was sitting and enjoying his evening coffee.
" Honey, I have a very very good news." Queen Bev said.
" Tell me my Queen, what is it ?" asked King Heneli as he put down the cup of coffee.
Queen Bev wrapped her arms around King Heneli's neck and said " We are having a baby. I have checked around 3 times today and it is positive. Can you believe that ? We are finally having a baby!"
" Are you serious ? The Lord has answered our prayer my dear. I am so happy to hear this. I love you so much." surprised King Heneli as he held Queen Bev's hands.

She and King Heneli were so happy that they would finally have a child. King Heneli expected the baby to be a boy so that he could continue his duty someday. People were as excited as them. They could not wait to find out and see the handsome Prince or the beautiful Princess of Zeeta.
     
Few months later, Queen Bev and King Heneli found out that they were having a baby boy.
" I can not believe that we are really having a baby boy. A prince honey." told King Heneli to his Queen.
" I know, We have to let everyone know and spread the happiness by having a big party to celebrate it." answered Queen Bev.
" I am going to invite all the people and the Zildez couple, King George and Queen Lorsa." said King Heneli.
King Heneli was so happy that he celebrated it with all the people. He also invited his collegues whom was from the Zildez Castle. They were King George and Queen Lorsa.  King George had known King Heneli for years. He was a strict person yet a kind one. As their husbands had a good relation, Queen Bev and Queen Lorsa got along as well. They would like to spend time and do things together.

At that moment, the Zildez couple were having a baby as well. However, they were having a baby girl. King Heneli and King George whom had a good friendship planned to make their children to be close someday so they might get into each other, get married, and continue to make such a brilliant country.
" I am sure that they will make a really beautiful couple." said King George.
" Of course, and they will make this country better as well." replied King Heneli.
Knowing the great idea, the people were so happy and excited but they hoped that the Prince and the Princess would be more humble than their parents now.

The day which was they had been waiting for finally came. Queen Bev gave birth to a baby boy who happened to be named as Prince Morden Heneli. She gave birth in a special room in Zeeta Castle with the help of the best doctor in the country. Beside all the happiness they had, there was this one dissapointment they had. The Zeeta couple were surprised to see that their newborn Prince had a very large birthmark covering his left face. Queen Bev did not have a problem with that. Unfortunately, King Heneli was not so happy about this and immediately denied the baby.
" He is still so beautiful Heneli, he is our miracle so you have to be grateful for him." cried Queen Bev as he held Prince Morden closely.
" But I can not let people know that our son, the prince of Zeeta Castle is actually not as perfect as they expected. He is not going to be a good looking man Bev!" hissed King Heneli angrily.
" I do not care, I am going to keep him. It does not matter of how people will think. You are such an arrogant Heneli!" yelled Queen Bev.
" I am your husband and the King here. What I command will goes. " said King Heneli as he left the room leaving Queen Bev holding Prince Morden dumbfounded.

to be continued......


2 comments:

  1. Do you think some dialogue lines could intensify the conflicts here and there ?
    ;-)

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  2. Wow this is a nice story, you can continue with a good composition like love and war of the kingdom :')

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